You are a writer.Therefore I point out to you in love: that sentence is OK, but unwieldy. Make it sleek, make it flow. Warmly with Aloha from Waikiki!
Excellent use of the word limn. It's a new word for me!
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You are a writer.
Therefore I point out to you in love: that sentence is OK, but unwieldy. Make it sleek, make it flow. Warmly with Aloha from Waikiki!
Excellent use of the word limn. It's a new word for me!
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